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"The ancient clock on the mantelpiece ticked rhythmically, counting down the seconds until the guests arrived." 4. Advanced Vocabulary (Used Correctly)

"The fog was a thick, gray blanket, swallowing the trees whole." 2. Show, Don't Tell 11.part2.rar

Which part do you find the hardest: the essay or finishing it? "The ancient clock on the mantelpiece ticked rhythmically,

Use more than just periods and commas. Try to include a question mark , exclamation mark , or ellipsis (... ) . swallowing the trees whole." 2. Show

"The ancient clock on the mantelpiece ticked rhythmically, counting down the seconds until the guests arrived." 4. Advanced Vocabulary (Used Correctly)

"The fog was a thick, gray blanket, swallowing the trees whole." 2. Show, Don't Tell

Which part do you find the hardest: the essay or finishing it?

Use more than just periods and commas. Try to include a question mark , exclamation mark , or ellipsis (... ) .