Through the smoke, they appeared—a wave of gray coats surging up the slope toward their position. Thomas’s hands shook, making it impossible to ram the cartridge down the barrel of his rifle. He watched Miller, who had been yelling seconds ago, fall silently, clutching his chest.
Should I expand on a specific day of the battle (e.g., )? subtitle Gettysburg
He huddled behind a fractured stone wall on the second day, the air thick with smoke that tasted of copper and black powder. His sergeant, a stern man named Miller, was trying to rally them. "Keep your heads down, keep loading!" Miller roared, though his own voice was raw. Through the smoke, they appeared—a wave of gray