You aren't just summarizing books. You are proving there is a "gap" in the neighborhood that your house needs to fill.
Once you have a draft, perform a . Go through your finished chapters and write one sentence in the margin for every paragraph explaining what that paragraph actually does. How to Write a Better Thesis
A better thesis isn't just a collection of facts; it’s a . Think of your thesis as a house: You aren't just summarizing books
This is the "how." Be transparent. If your tools are shaky, the whole house falls. Go through your finished chapters and write one
This is where you show your work. Every paragraph should serve one purpose: proving your central claim. Chapter 3: The "Shitty First Draft"
If a paragraph doesn't relate back to your introduction, it's a "darling"—and you must kill it. Chapter 5: The "So What?" Factor